Friday 11 May 2012

Autumn


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Autumn   1/5/2012           

Falling leaves.

Piles of leaves everywhere.

Kids playing in the piles of leaves.

Wind blowing the piles over.

Leaves falling from the tall trees.

The sun making the leaves crisp.              

WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing
SUCCESS CRITERIA

SELF ASSESSMENT
Includes four nouns (from observation)
6/6
Made the nouns do something
6/6
Started each new description on a new line
6/6
Extended each line so it makes more sense
(may include a who, where, why, what, when).
6/6




                                                         

1 comment:

  1. wow zeb.i like the poem about leaves.you should see the video of me on our class blog.parkvalelowe@blogspot.com.it is on how to make a worm farm.


    ethin templeton.rm 13

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